I can see you learned quite a bit, but you still need a lot of work before you're ready to post, as I find this game to be incomplete and buggy.
The visuals need a LOT of work and I found them difficult to look at for long periods of time. The UI is awful. What you wrote is difficult to read and understand, and you need a spell checker big time. Whether or not these were supposed to be placeholder graphics, it's a moot point when you submit it, because now we have to assume it's completed.
Working knowledge of how to put a game together is good. What you should do from this point is restart and post in the collaboration section of the forums. See if you can assemble a good team to supplement you in all of the areas that you're deficient, and put together a clean and finished project based on your idea.
If you take my advice and create a forum post for help, make sure you spell out "clearly" what kind of game you're trying to build. This makes it easier for people to decided whether or not they want to work on it. So for these reasons, I had to vote 0 on this attempt.
Good luck in the future